Date: 4/17/2014 Views: 39068 Favorites: 130 Comments: 40
Hi all here is first page of my new comic and also its my dream that i had last time so well here will be show how all did begin
continue of comic will show on my DA and FA accounts only
Commisions open
leave me PM if you interested
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TheNewlyTransformedYoshi
Wow... Awesome!!
Zackman1996
bad engrish is bad (just joking)
Elliotissokool
>comic sans
Doggard
dammin i hate when that happens ;-)
SpongeBat1
What is this, a TF comic or a poorly translated RPG?
Crissa
Either would be okay with me. I'd love a TF themed RPG.
SpongeBat1
Yeah, even if it was poorly translated (those are usually the best).
Crissa
The text is weird. I'd suggest choosing a size and sticking to it except for exclamations, something pretty easy to read.
Also, text in images is hard to spell/grammar check, and difficult to translate and read for people who have trouble with that.
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
he said pace not place
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
i didnt even notice the grammar mistakes until you pointed them out
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
do you take commisions or requests
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
this pace looks familiar pace?
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
you spelled little wrong even THE water looks strange page 3 panel 2 so much wrong
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
are you doing this on purpose
Tomek1000
english is not my main language and coz i only used it to comunicate in games my grama is not best
Tomek1000
Yes i do
Tomek1000
leave me mesage if you would want commision
Halfwolfhalfgriffin
what langauge do you speak?
Tomek1000
Polish but i got no problems with understund english
Qwertypoop
Never use Google Translate. Ever. If your English isn't good, don't write long sentences; most people don't come here for the plot.
YoshiFan64
I like plot in my tf's...
Higuy
I saw the picture and my brain imedently went 'mystery dungeon! click now!'
Tomek1000
ye i know that mystery dungeons but i didynt get idea for that tf from there
LupustheWolf
I recently had a dream about being a Dragon a few nights ago but the Dragon in my dream was red and white.
Ciervo
Nicely done on the metal effects! :)
TheWorgenWarrior
I recently had a dream about being a werewolf!
LupustheWolf
Stay away from Silver Bullets.
TheWorgenWarrior
i don't think silver bullets existed in my dream.
Incarna
What does the necklace do?
Tomek1000
its part of my soul half is in me and half in it that give me imortal and chance to reinkarnate also if i lose part of body i will get new one ty to that stone on necklace
Rainshadow
galaxy hopping dragons!! totally epic XD
Qwertypoop
Dat grammar
TheWorgenWarrior
Yay u got more pages done!
Elliotissokool
"i live only 1 time"
YOLO
Tomek1000
sorry i dont know english spelling of it
tj532317
YOLO means You Only Live Once :)
TheWorgenWarrior
and my annoying friends keep saying YOLOswag
Crissa
Better! I'll keep an eye out for your comics on FA!
Crisp
Turned into a dragon. Reaction: oh, ok.
A blue stone gets stuck on your neck. Reaction: WTFWTFWTF GET IT OFF ME! THIS IS SO WEIRD!
Is it just me or is something weird going on here?
Tomek1000
maybe he is ok with being dragon XD