Another transgender commission I got. The idea was, a 'photo album' appearance of images taken of the process of transition. Edited the final piece. Hopefully fixed!
Hmm, unusual idea for a sequence here. Neat idea, and nice work so far, especially his expression in the first picture. One quibble: Are you leaving out the feet as an artistic decision or what? Because it's pencil work, I'm not sure; it'd be more obvious that it's a deliberate fade to white if it were inked or colored.
It almost looks like an AR coupled with TG. I doubt it is, but the proportions and the gradual descent down the stairs make such an idea plausible. Regardless, it's well drawn.
It could be, but I think from the looks of the clothes (which looks rather childish to me), the jewelry, and the fact she looks to have shrunken a bit all combined make me think it's an AR to pre-teens or so.
This series evokes a level of sentimentality in me... I am yet to start my own TG... yet this makes me feel... peaceful about it. I thank both you and the commissioner for sharing it.
Oh there was 5 page?? Nice work there too :) She looks VERY content with the transition and passes very well... thouh i can kinda relate to her at beginning since well he was she even then.... hmmm *Is Andrgynous*
Must have pressed the button more than once when you were posting it. :P I really like page 4. The clothes look great and I love the proportions on her :D
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Gfox
Hmm, unusual idea for a sequence here. Neat idea, and nice work so far, especially his expression in the first picture. One quibble: Are you leaving out the feet as an artistic decision or what? Because it's pencil work, I'm not sure; it'd be more obvious that it's a deliberate fade to white if it were inked or colored.
Shadey
It looks like it's deliberate to me. Looks cool.
wheezil
This looks really nice so far. I like the photo album concept.
Wilsjam2uk
Cute face in picture 2!
namewitheld
so it's a tg then?
Gfox
I also like the idea of moving along the staircase in the process instead of having a static pose in every frame.
Miscme
It almost looks like an AR coupled with TG. I doubt it is, but the proportions and the gradual descent down the stairs make such an idea plausible. Regardless, it's well drawn.
Halfwing
I really enjoyed this sequence, the idea as well as the art- one question though, is the tail obscured in pic 4?
Crissa
Wow, it's really alot like RL transition. It's even got that awkward teenish overdoing it phase! Cute.
foxfan
Very nice, like the style of it myself. It seems like a AR/TG followed by a quick AP to me, but great in any case.
cloakable
<3 looking forward to the rest of this
Uratoh
For some reason the shirt in page 2 disturbs me @_@.
Mist
Seems like real life transition, really is well done and quite intriguing for anyone to look at :)
Dragonkeeper
Agreed kapool, the AR in 3 may just be the proportions he said he messed up on though
foxfan
It could be, but I think from the looks of the clothes (which looks rather childish to me), the jewelry, and the fact she looks to have shrunken a bit all combined make me think it's an AR to pre-teens or so.
Kazen
Yeah, what appears to be AR in page 3 is unintentional. Page 4's tail is meant to be hidden, heh.
foxfan
Oh well, still very good. =)
takara-dragon
This series evokes a level of sentimentality in me... I am yet to start my own TG... yet this makes me feel... peaceful about it. I thank both you and the commissioner for sharing it.
Mist
Oh there was 5 page?? Nice work there too :) She looks VERY content with the transition and passes very well... thouh i can kinda relate to her at beginning since well he was she even then.... hmmm *Is Andrgynous*
fishfinger
what the fuck is up with the eyes in the last panel
Uratoh
ya...the eyes in the last panel...@_@
Kazen
Er, what exactly is the problem?
jalapenomaster
the eyes seem a tad "off" unsymetrical if you will. (yay spelling!)
Kazen
Aahh, alright, I'll see what I can do. (Yay Photoshop, heh.) And I believe you're looking for 'asymmetrical'.
Kazen
Sorry about the...posting. Not sure how that's happening...
Zres
Must have pressed the button more than once when you were posting it. :P I really like page 4. The clothes look great and I love the proportions on her :D
Alex_Warlorn
I don't quite get this sequence
black_wolf
Looks more like all the kids running down the stairs than a sequence, Love it either way.
ttmsnail
I agree with black_wolf, but that is still a cool Idea.
iozzi89
is this male fox to female fox? looks tight